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December 31, 2012
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Took a while... a long while...

anywho feel free to use.

Toast (c) *MilynnPrower
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Critique by *PocketSeal Apr 5, 2013, 10:03:21 PM
Okay, this was a pretty eye catching picture for me. I've never seen a picture like this where a dog (?) and a piece of toast fit together like this certain picture. However, I can't really tell if he's grabbing the piece of toast or throwing it, maybe some motion lines will help? The blur effect is sort of on beginner side here, maybe try to make it a bit funnel shaped like the piece of toast is slicing through the air at great speed. I don't have that many problems wit the body, except maybe the arm is too short and his other arm seem to not be there. Shading for silly and dramatic effect is also recommended But over all, I think this is a pretty creative and unique picture! Keep on improving! (Also, sorry if I messed up on English, it's not my first language. ^^; )
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~MinTz99 Jan 9, 2013
thx for fave ma oic .U.

umm...could you help me? i mean i dunno how to change the profil pic .-.
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*MilynnPrower Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
profile pic on dA?
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~MinTz99 Jan 9, 2013
oh i just found out .u.
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*MilynnPrower Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome its cute~
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~MinTz99 Jan 9, 2013
thank chuu
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~MinTz99 Jan 9, 2013
yuss /:3
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*ShanachuXD Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you should of put cinnamon in that toast.
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